siggamaria93
Cadet
I think I love you, Jack
ALL CHARACTERS except those I develop, belong toe JJ Abrams and ABC TV.
RATING: NC-17 for some violence, sex, and minimal language.
SUMMARY: He was a man of the lower class, she was the daughter of one of the richest men in the country. Jack and Irina Fiction ;D This story happens in 1880-and forward
Ever since he was 8 he had helped provide for his family, and now 12 years later he was still doing the same. In the eyes of society Jack Bristow was nothing more than a brilliant hard worker trying to get better job and a better life. Being the youngest of 5 children, his father had wanted him to go and seek a better life outside the small village. But when Jack was eight the money was so little he couldn´t afford not to have Jack work. But Jacks father, William Bristow had always seen to the fact that Jack was to go to school, along side with working. Now Jack was 20 years old and had already received a scholarship to one of the most prestigious schools in all of England. But that was next fall, and he was able to help his family the whole summer before that, he thought.
Jack Bristow was a tall man, fit and had brown and curly hair. He was considered extremely handsome, and was the main catch in the small village. Most of the time he had kept to himself though, and had only had one girlfriend. That was when he was 14.
Since she was very young her whole world had been about her getting the right man. Personally she thought it was completely her fathers fault, but her mother had insisted she was to go to school. Irene (irina) Derevko was the daughter of Alexander Derevko, a Russian businessman, who had moved to England before she was born. She was the first one in the family to be born and raised in England. Irina´s sisters, Katya and Elena were born in Russia. Both sisters had dark brown hair, almost black. They enjoyed the life of the upper class. Irina did not. All she wanted was to go out and find someone to love and want to share her life with, and she highly doubted that she would find that in the upper society.
Irina Derevko was the most beautiful of the three sisters. She had light brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. Her slim figure was muscled, for she had done ballet like every young lady was to do. She was frequently sought out on balls, but noone was good enough for her.
This summer her family was going to stay at one of their summer houses/castles and Irina at the age of 19, intended to go to at least one country ball, even if she had to sneak out.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On the 24th of May, the whole Derevko family started their journey to the summer villa. Irina was reading a book, and was completely lost in it. The book was about a rich man who fell in love with a poor girl. And when his family banned him from marrying her, he ran off with her.
" Oh sis, aren"t you ever going to stop dreaming" Katya said as she grabbed the book straight out of Irina´s hands. " Ah katya, we both know none of this will come true, so give her her book back" Elena said as she saw Irina give Katya a deathly look.
" she has to realize that men are pigs, and are only good for 2 things" Katya stated." Money and sex" " Oh come on you girls" came from the front seat, as the three sisters started to fight heavily.
------ 8 hours and o lot of fighting later-------
They were now driving through the small village, and Katya was complaining constlantly about being hungry. Their father stopped the car and let the girls stretch their legs, and gave Irina money so she could buy something for the family to eat on the way.
Irina walked for about 5 minutes, and finally found an open market. She walked straight up to one of the stands that sold fruit. The apples looked great, and she picked three of them. When she turned around she saw a young man around her age walking towards the stand. He was very good looking, and was wearing a white shirt, and an open west and then black trousers. He had brown curled hair( not too much though) and was holding an open letter.
Jack had just received a letter from the school, it was about his apartment. The letter said the street name and number of the house. It sounded nice to him. He decided to celibrate with his family, now that the school was formally set up. So he went to the square and was about to buy some fruit when he saw her. She was looking at him, but the moment he looked back she had looked away. Jack´s breath got cought in his throat, she was beautiful. Her dark hair was tied in a knot, and she was wearing a very delicate dress. No wait hold that thought,, she was wearing a very expensive dress. At that moment Jack almost gave up all hope.
He walked towards the stand, and started to look for something to buy. He saw the apples and decided to buy some of them, he picked out 10 and asked for a bag.
"The apples look especially good" He said to the young woman, for she had just brought some. But the moment the words slipped from his mouth he regretted it ,, just the most stupid pick-up line ever.
"yes, they look delicious" Irina said, blushing slightly. " so i´ve never seen you around here before, are you new?" Jack asked, gaining a little hope of getting to know her.
"erm,, actually me and my family are just staying here for the summer, in the old Carlton hall. That would be our summerhouse"
"Ah all right" Jack said, he couldn´t hide the disappointment in his voice. She was upper class, like higest class. He didn´t have a chance. Or so he thought.
Okay so what did you guys think??? Please comment or send me a PM
This is my first fiction so don´t break me down completely just say if you want me to continue
.. and the R rated part will come in the next chapters ;D
ALL CHARACTERS except those I develop, belong toe JJ Abrams and ABC TV.
RATING: NC-17 for some violence, sex, and minimal language.
SUMMARY: He was a man of the lower class, she was the daughter of one of the richest men in the country. Jack and Irina Fiction ;D This story happens in 1880-and forward
Ever since he was 8 he had helped provide for his family, and now 12 years later he was still doing the same. In the eyes of society Jack Bristow was nothing more than a brilliant hard worker trying to get better job and a better life. Being the youngest of 5 children, his father had wanted him to go and seek a better life outside the small village. But when Jack was eight the money was so little he couldn´t afford not to have Jack work. But Jacks father, William Bristow had always seen to the fact that Jack was to go to school, along side with working. Now Jack was 20 years old and had already received a scholarship to one of the most prestigious schools in all of England. But that was next fall, and he was able to help his family the whole summer before that, he thought.
Jack Bristow was a tall man, fit and had brown and curly hair. He was considered extremely handsome, and was the main catch in the small village. Most of the time he had kept to himself though, and had only had one girlfriend. That was when he was 14.
Since she was very young her whole world had been about her getting the right man. Personally she thought it was completely her fathers fault, but her mother had insisted she was to go to school. Irene (irina) Derevko was the daughter of Alexander Derevko, a Russian businessman, who had moved to England before she was born. She was the first one in the family to be born and raised in England. Irina´s sisters, Katya and Elena were born in Russia. Both sisters had dark brown hair, almost black. They enjoyed the life of the upper class. Irina did not. All she wanted was to go out and find someone to love and want to share her life with, and she highly doubted that she would find that in the upper society.
Irina Derevko was the most beautiful of the three sisters. She had light brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. Her slim figure was muscled, for she had done ballet like every young lady was to do. She was frequently sought out on balls, but noone was good enough for her.
This summer her family was going to stay at one of their summer houses/castles and Irina at the age of 19, intended to go to at least one country ball, even if she had to sneak out.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On the 24th of May, the whole Derevko family started their journey to the summer villa. Irina was reading a book, and was completely lost in it. The book was about a rich man who fell in love with a poor girl. And when his family banned him from marrying her, he ran off with her.
" Oh sis, aren"t you ever going to stop dreaming" Katya said as she grabbed the book straight out of Irina´s hands. " Ah katya, we both know none of this will come true, so give her her book back" Elena said as she saw Irina give Katya a deathly look.
" she has to realize that men are pigs, and are only good for 2 things" Katya stated." Money and sex" " Oh come on you girls" came from the front seat, as the three sisters started to fight heavily.
------ 8 hours and o lot of fighting later-------
They were now driving through the small village, and Katya was complaining constlantly about being hungry. Their father stopped the car and let the girls stretch their legs, and gave Irina money so she could buy something for the family to eat on the way.
Irina walked for about 5 minutes, and finally found an open market. She walked straight up to one of the stands that sold fruit. The apples looked great, and she picked three of them. When she turned around she saw a young man around her age walking towards the stand. He was very good looking, and was wearing a white shirt, and an open west and then black trousers. He had brown curled hair( not too much though) and was holding an open letter.
Jack had just received a letter from the school, it was about his apartment. The letter said the street name and number of the house. It sounded nice to him. He decided to celibrate with his family, now that the school was formally set up. So he went to the square and was about to buy some fruit when he saw her. She was looking at him, but the moment he looked back she had looked away. Jack´s breath got cought in his throat, she was beautiful. Her dark hair was tied in a knot, and she was wearing a very delicate dress. No wait hold that thought,, she was wearing a very expensive dress. At that moment Jack almost gave up all hope.
He walked towards the stand, and started to look for something to buy. He saw the apples and decided to buy some of them, he picked out 10 and asked for a bag.
"The apples look especially good" He said to the young woman, for she had just brought some. But the moment the words slipped from his mouth he regretted it ,, just the most stupid pick-up line ever.
"yes, they look delicious" Irina said, blushing slightly. " so i´ve never seen you around here before, are you new?" Jack asked, gaining a little hope of getting to know her.
"erm,, actually me and my family are just staying here for the summer, in the old Carlton hall. That would be our summerhouse"
"Ah all right" Jack said, he couldn´t hide the disappointment in his voice. She was upper class, like higest class. He didn´t have a chance. Or so he thought.
Okay so what did you guys think??? Please comment or send me a PM
This is my first fiction so don´t break me down completely just say if you want me to continue
.. and the R rated part will come in the next chapters ;D