*sniff* Thanks for making me cry into my CHOCOLATE MILK, Laur... *glares* Though I doubt any of it got into the actual milk, because I am drinking it out of a juice box... :lol: So I guess that means you're forgibben. Not that I could actually hate you in the first place, SINCE YOU FREAKING UPDATED!!!!
*runs around in circles*
DUDE! LAUR ACTUALLY UPDATED.
:thud:
And I know I've read it before, but I'll read it again. And I also know that I've reviewed before, but I'm reviewing it again. *nods* Cos I'm not in the mood to write notes on Australian history... It's so dull. BUT THIS?! THIS IS WHAT YOU CALL GOOD WRITING!!!! :happydance:
And Cai doesn't get why you don't understand that you're a good writer. Especially the “I feel nothing”s and the “I see darkness”s... They're beautiful. And I know you're gonna say something in all your modesty, like it's lame or something, and a three year old could write that... But keeping it short like that puts more emphasis and importance in the words than if it were long, so Laur has actually done a bwilliant job with that, it has more emotion to it than you think it has... Maybe you can't see that because you're the one writing it?
*taps Laur's noggin* But you've got it in there now, right? I hope so. Okay, so all that rambling to about... Seven minutes all up. Fourteen minutes till eleven AM... Maybe I should get studying, so I'm not left taking notes all day?
Hm... Meh. Let's ramble a little bit more...ADAM!!!!
*WAILS*
I dont get why the girl has to survive. I mean what does she have, that Adam doesn't have? Sure, Heather's a pretty name and all, but ADAM IS A BOY! And boys are better than girls... *ahem* Doesn't that make you wonder why I myself, am a girl? :blink: But duuuude. BOY BABIES ARE CUTER!!!! But noooo, Laur had to make him die. And if that doesn't have enough emphasis to it, then:
LAUR HAD TO MAKE HIM DIEEEEEE!!!
:laughbounce:
I have to say though, the way you wrote his death was magnifical. A cross between magnificent and magical *nods* ^_^ Because it's not often that babies die in fluffy S/V fics... SO YAY FOR LAUR FOR BEING DIFFERENT! *waves pom poms* But you honestly don't think that you're forgiven already for killing my Adam yet, do you? :eyebrow:
Anyway, I think that's enough rambling for the morning... I should probably stop procrastinating now. But it so fuuuun. But it's not good. So fuuuuuuuuun.
*sits on that little voice*
<_<
Anyway, toodles for now, Miss Laur... *prod* And while I'm here, I may as well poke you, so that maybe you'll start writing again...
Cai
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